Monday, April 26, 2010

...Happiness...

Learning Intention: To use different word classes to paint a picture.
Success Criteria: To use nouns and adjectives in our cameo writing.

Happiness brings joy to life, it makes us bright and filled with delight.
It’s enjoyable, laughable, and even loveable too; for as long as you’re happy, you’ll always be true.
Happiness is such a motive word that’ll always be true; because it will always be bringing such pleasantness to you.
To me, happiness is something so bold because, you know what, it’s as precious as gold!

8 comments:

  1. Vaelei Afa Lee KumApril 28, 2010 at 2:04 PM

    This is one exciting moment! This must have been a really great experience for you to write something like this.

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  2. This is a very strong piece of writing. I wish happiness is something that comes everyday and can be shared amongst everyone around you.

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  3. hey hola you right happiness does bring joy to life.

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  4. It's really to that your feeling happy today. But do rember that your strong to.

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  5. hey hola
    i like your inspirational poem !!
    keep up the good writing

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  6. This is a good piece of writing and it is good to read, keep up the good work.

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  7. Hey hola i know happieness is a joyful thing that can beat sadness it is cool to know that you are happy but not sad !!!

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  8. Hey hola happiness is all about being happy and your story is fun to read.

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